childhood

Today I waked up early, I had a course. So I had to go to school. When I got out, I saw the weather. That was very cold today, snowy and windy. I opened the door. My god! That was terrible. It was a heavy snow. I didn't want to go to school. I would like to sleep. The bed was so warn. I never leave my bed. There was deep snow on the ground. I struggled to get out. The snow was very deep. My shoes would be wet. I was upset. The wet shoes made me uncomfortable. I walked and warped my coat tight. I spent more time than usual to get to the train station. The train moved slowly and I waited longer time. About few minute, I finally arrived at school. When I up stairs, a men fell down and made a lot of noise. The man lied on the ground. The men looked like so painful.  His clothes became very dusty. Some people helped the man to stand up. He walked hard and walked slowly.  After the accident, I was afraid of I will be just like him. I up stairs carefully and slowly. I safely got to s...

I saw Kadija's posting. In her posting, I discover some wrong things. There were over two sentences connect together, but no comma. She didn't capitalize the first letter of a sentence in many ares in the article. She put more space between two sentences. The essay had different tense in same things. A few of sentences needed period in the end, but I couldn't see it.

About the unit 1, I learn a little bit culture. There are different culture in different counties. Culture is diverse.

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This is my childhood's picture. The picture was taken in my hometown. It took when I was four years old. There are my sister, my brother and my cousins. In that day, it was a sunny day.  We didn't go to school. We were so happy. So we decided to play the interesting games in the fields. We played the whole afternoon. When finished the games, my aunt went back my home. She brought a rabbit doll for me as my birthday's gift. The rabbit looked so cute. I was very excited I got the rabbit. Finally, we took a picture as a souvenir.